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Closing her eyes
Drawing the bow across the string
Tears swell
As the notes begin to ring

A deep forlorn note
Sorrowful and low
Echoes from the violin
Passionate and slow

She tells her sad story
On the wistful winds
As a grim lament
For her lover lost begins

The melody is bitter sweet
Full of passion and pain
Reaching its crescendo
In the fiery refrain

This is how she has learned
to make it through the night
Telling her story to the stars
Reading the notes by moonlight
Music is one of the best ways to express youself, too bad i'm not as skilled as i would like to be.

I will be editing this to add a preview image, eventually, whenever my internet actually gets fixed. but i have a lovely shot of my violin, it was the inspiration after all...
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souleaterandDTH Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol im in 6th going to 7th grade right now.violin is a very big deal to me
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souleaterandDTH Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol i cried playing the violin once and then everyone was wondering what was wrong with me XD music is a very powerful way of expressing emotion and whether you notice it or not,it may or will become a big part of your life.
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marrylily Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Professional Artist
Beautiful! Violin is really awesome. I feel complete when I play.
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Nuttelia Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Yes, I play the violin, grade 7 (I got an A+ in my grade 7 exam :squee: )

That poem... made me cryyyy.
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violetsorceress Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011
Very lovely and bittersweet. Well done!
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LorakTodesengel13 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, what a lovely poem! :heart:
Pretty awesome!
Violin is the best instrument ever! Hahah! I love mine ^^
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Invisible000 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2009
thanks, I don't play much anymore. It's very sad.
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LorakTodesengel13 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Very welcome :heart:
Oh, that's sad :/
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Spongyruler Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2008
Awesome poem! I love my violin... It's probably one of the most beautiful instruments out there.
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Sunshine-006 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2007
I love this poem! Cosidering that I feel just about the same in regards to music. It's really good.
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